Some examples of guided writing

DEAR  STUDENTS OF CLASS 9 & 10
You are requested to go one by one thoroughly.

GUIDIED WRITING
(Two questions are asked in the examination. Each carries five marks.

1.1  Completing broken dialogues.

1.       Complete the following dialogue with the appropriate sentences in the box given below:          

Waiter     :    ……………………… What would you like?

Dilip         :    ………………………..

Waiter     :    Here you’re, sir.

Dilip         :    ………………….. and a glass of lassi. What would you take, Radha?

Radha      :    …………………………. and fanta.

Waiter     :    Would you like …………………., ma’m?

Radha      :    Oh, I like veg. noodles.

Waiter     :    ………………, ma’m.

a) I’ll take noodles                    b) Thank you c) to mix anything in noodles    d) Good afternoon, sir. e) I want chicken mo mo           f) Can I see the menu?

2.       Complete the following dialogue with the appropriate sentences in the box given below:          

Receptionist     : How can I help you, sir?

Mr. Pant    :      ………………………………… .

Receptionist     : What kind of rooms would you like, sir?

Mr. Pant    :      …………………………….. .

Receptionist     :                           ……………………………..

Mr. Pant    :      Maybe, for two nights. Is there hot shower service?

Receptionist:    Of course, ……………. Will you fill up this form, please?

Mr. Pant    :      …………….. Here you are.

Receptionist     :                                       ……………….., sir.

a) Having double beds with attach bath.  b) Sure … c) We want two bed rooms.                      d) Thank you e) we have solar heating system.    f) How long will you stay, sir?

1. 2 Congratulation Letter/ Message

Model:

Que.: A friend of your stood first in national level essay competition. Write a message of congratulation for a national newspaper. Include the following points:                                 6

          Name, Deed, Award, etc,

Ans.:

Congratulation! I express my heartiest congratulation for  the great success of my intimate friend Kedar Ghimire He stood first in national level essay competition. He has already won three other awards on the district level essay competition. He is an interesting and good poet, too. He has written so many interesting poems and published a collection of most of those poems. He is also a good actor. He has acted in so many TV serials of comedy with me. I am proud of him. It is really a splendid achievement.   May God continue to grant him similar successes throughout his life.   Sitaram Kattel

Que:  A friend of your scored first in the final examination. Write a message of congratulation to him.

Bhairahawa Nepal 24th Jan, 2018 My dear Norbu, I am very happy to learn about your brilliant success in the examination. You are really a wonderful person. You have topped the list and won a scholarship, too. My heartiest congratulations! The news of your success has delighted  us all beyond  measure. Everybody here is dancing with joy. We are proud of you. You have shown the way to all your friends. It is our will that shapes our destiny. It is really a splendid achievement. I have no doubt you will rise from glory to glory. May god help you to continue similar successes throughout your life.  With best wishes Kamal

  
For further practice
1.    Your friend, Saroj Sherpa, from Solukhumbu climbed the Everest. Write a formal notice on congratulations in a newspaper to him on behalf of the school and classmates: (2062 D)

2.       Imagine that one of your friends Bharat has passed the SLC in the highest first division; write a congratulation letter to him. (2062E1) 6

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1.3 Condolence (Formal and Informal)

1. Suppose you are Madhav Joshi and your friend is Laxman Shahi. Both of you were working at Himalayan International Secretarial Centre. Unfortunately, Laxman was killed in a bus accident that plunged into Trisuli River. Write a formal notice of condolence to be published in a newspaper, using the clues given in the box.

                                                                                                           

Laxman Shahi-----32 years old---typist---died on Feb. 12, 2015---always humorous and cheerful --- liked by all the friends --- a great loss. 

Answer:

Heartfelt Condolence

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I express my deep sympathy and grief at the sudden and untimely

demise of

MR. LAXMAN SHAHI

He was an active typist of Himalayan International Secretarial Centre. He was just 32 years old, who died on Feb. 12, 2015 in a bus accident that plunged into Trisuli river. He was always humorous and cheerful. He was very helpful so he was liked by all his friends. It is a great loss for the institution. I missed him very much.

I extend my heartfelt condolence to his bereaved family and relatives and pray that his departed soul will rest in peace in heaven.

He will always remain in my heart and memory.

Madhav Joshi

2. You and your friend, Juneli Gurung, were working in Gyan Punja Secondary School in Sanothimi Bhaktapur. Unfortunately, she was killed in a road accident while crossing the road in Maitighar, Kathmandu. Use the clues in the box to write a letter of condolence to her parents.

                                                                                                       

Juneli Gurung-----24 years old---English teacher---died on Feb. 28^th, 2015--- friendly and honest --- hard working and helpful.

Answer:

Harmi-6,

Gorkha

March 10, 2015

Dear Uncle and Aunt,

I am very much shocked with the news of sudden and untimely demise of your daughter Juneli Gurung. As you know, we were working in Gyan Punja Secondary School in Sanothimi, Bhaktapur. She was just 24 years old. She was a popular English teacher. She was friendly and honest. She had impressed both teachers and students. She was also hard working and helpful. Unfortunately, she was killed in a road accident while crossing the road in Maitighar, Kathmandu on Feb. 28^th 2015.

I pray to the god to provide a rest in peace to her departed soul in heaven and to give you strength to overcome your grief. I have missed her very much. It’s a great loss.

Yours sincerely,

Rashmi Adhikari